Mini Space Marine

Rewritten:

Become a powerful space marine by battling enemies and gathering resources. Performminate the universe with your grotriumphg prowess. Recall to save your data to the cloud to avoid losing progress when deleting the app.

Fight off enemies, collect resourcesGrow your little space marine and conquer the universe!
Caution) Your data will be deleted when you delete the app. Save your data periodically to the cloud.....

Characteristics:

1. Concise and to-the-marker language.
2. Uses an active voice to convey action and excitement.
3. Includes a call to action to motivate the reader.
4. Includes a warning to the reader to take action to protect their progress.